Over the last few days, I have been working on editing the magazine article after the initial feedback. That feedback generally went along the lines of;More features and aspects - the magazine advert needed additional information on it such as tour dates of the featured band.
- Tickets details, such as where you can buy them from,
- Merch details, same as ticket aspects; where you can buy it,
- More variation in the font and general style of the advert.
I have taken this feedback into account and I have edited the design, subtly, but in such a way that you can see the changes. Click here to see the maximised image.
in essence its a singular image, so not evidencing advanced image editing skills; too text-led/heavy
ReplyDeletethats not to say you wouldn't see sim ads in some mags, but you need to put the bar higher and be more creative - the delays in shooting, even test shooting, narrative footage etc are impacting on the ancillary texts too as this would surely have given you material to work with